Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Nearly the Last Lap

It's time to start wrapping things up with this story.

I've just completed the pencils for the third and final version of my Visual Storytelling II comic. In the same way as the previous sets, we were to revisit the story and draw all different shot calls and panel layouts. This time though, we were required to change an element of our stories. I made the decision to change the carousel technician's gender so that it would alter the dynamic between my two main characters. Because of that, the dialogue changed entirely, but I'm happy with the result. This was a nice way of approaching the story and it allowed me to make it even more solid.

Here are the pages:



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