Finished Four-pager

I've managed to hang in there this whole quarter and devote all my time to a single story. Revisiting the same script 3 different times is definitely a process I recommend.

Unfortunately, I've exhausted myself with this project and it's hard to say if I'm truly satisfied with the final inked pages. I think a couple weeks of winter break will refresh my mind.


Here you have it, folks! The finished four pager:

Another quarter done. One final quarter at SCAD to go!

Nearly the Last Lap

It's time to start wrapping things up with this story.

I've just completed the pencils for the third and final version of my Visual Storytelling II comic. In the same way as the previous sets, we were to revisit the story and draw all different shot calls and panel layouts. This time though, we were required to change an element of our stories. I made the decision to change the carousel technician's gender so that it would alter the dynamic between my two main characters. Because of that, the dialogue changed entirely, but I'm happy with the result. This was a nice way of approaching the story and it allowed me to make it even more solid.

Here are the pages:

PRELIMINARY WORK/ THUMBNAILS:

Visual Storytelling II

This class in the grand finale before I'm let loose on my senior project.

In Visual Storytelling II, students write a script for a four-page comic and draw the story three different ways. Each retelling of the story requires entirely different panel layouts and shot calls. In short, nothing can be the same; the only constant is the story events and dialogue between characters.

My story, Right Turn, is about a cranky, kid-hating carousel operator who suddenly has admiration for a patient elementary school girl.

FINISHED PENCILS:

CONCEPT WORK:

THUMBNAILS: